Pretty Crazy

Not exactly what I was expecting. I still really like this though. Yeah, maybe it dragged on a little, but it was okay because of the amount of detail and ...

This has so many possibilities. I can't wait to read on! One little thing though, throughout the entire story, I thought the character was a girl. It wasn't until I ...

There is no copyright in ideas. Nobody owns them. All stories draw on the stories that came before. Harry Potter, Star Wars, Eragon, The Wheel of Time, The Sword of ...

I've often asked that question myself. I know I'm far from being good enough for someone to copy my writing. But what about if I have an original idea and ...

How did you do that! His face is almost perfect! Kudos to you for doing the impossible! Now, here comes the critique: Wings: they don't look very real. The texture ...

Yeah, it's been way too long since I've posted this. Anyway, here's the rest of where I left off. Any and all comments encouraged. ---------------------------------------------------------------------

Fascinating. I really enjoyed reading this. This may not be extremely original though. We've all seen stories start with the crime hundreds of times. It's effective, and I'm not saying ...

The shading is incredible. Your details are very realistic. There is a few things out of proportion about her though. But before I make my suggestions, just thought I'd tell ...

You made me overcook my Kraft Dinner. :( But seriously, I could not stop reading this! Read the whole thing. I love the setting in it and the flow of ...

I think I'm going to like this. Well, I'll definitely read some more of it anyway. You have a really neat idea here. This is very hooking. Once the reader ...

"What happened?" I ask as Falcon comes in the house. I'm still shaking from what happened. The whole thing was impossible not to see from the window I was looking ...

Yes, let's. I'll post right after someone else does. Or should this be put on hold? If it's just going to crash again it would be no use to try, ...

It's okay.

Cody opened his eyes to sunlight streaking through the trees. The scent of leaves and forest floor greenery filled his nose. Next to him, a leaf dripped leftover rainwater. He ...

Hello! It is my pleasure to review this. I really liked this. I didn’t know where I was running to, or what I was running from but my head was ...